The flowers are dying
The man said
With tears in his eyes
Wilted flowers reminded him
The passing of the beloved wife
She was dead when the newborn baby cried
More new blooms start
The daughter said
Wilted flowers reminded her
The passing of the dearest mom
In peaceful heaven she is now
Thanks god we are alive and know to treasure the life
if you see the dead end
why don’t you treasure the life
11 Responses to "One single impression: the passing"
A wonderful message that you convey through poetry.. Very wise words.
So very sad. A reminder, though, that life is fleeting. Thank you.
Its a good take on the prompt..yes..we must trreasure life and trust me we do.. or we won't be here sharing..
if you see the dead end why don’t you treasure the life
Good point. A lovely poem.
A deep bow in respect of this entry! Please have a good Monday.
daily athens
How beautiful your poem is...an ending and a beginning. Wonderful...
Deep and powerful!
I watch while the mountains crumble
so poignant dear, but helps us get through with reminiscing our loved ones who went ahead!
and to treasure this precious life!
That is beautifully sad- well done- sometimes you have to see Life from another perspective don't you?
this one, my dear, runs deep!
Very beautifully written, M.T.S. In a way having a reminder that comes before us is very tough to handle.
For sure we can't rid the earth of dying flowers. :)
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