One Single Impression: Cocoon

My pride is my cocoon
Where I hide my tears when I cry
My fear is my cocoon
Where the wounds healed but pain left
Your love is my cocoon
Where I find who I am
And soon feel lost again

10 Responses to "One Single Impression: Cocoon"

Tammie (visit their site)

wonderful how you show us that we have many places to burrow and then be born again.

I like what you did with our prompt.

gautami tripathy (visit their site)

I like what you convey here!

crumbling walls

Amity (visit their site)

all of us i guess has each nurtured cocoons for us to run to and hide...:)

a unique take on the prompt!

Greyscale Territory (visit their site)

Love the paradox of the last three lines! Beautiful!

SandyCarlson (visit their site)

Love is difficult business. I like what you have written here.

Ramesh Sood (visit their site)

Simply beautiful...what a way to express and perhaps give and gain confidence..

Anonymous (visit their site)

A deep bow in respect of these lines. Please have a great Tuesday.

daily athens f

Tumblewords: (visit their site)

Life is a constant renewal, shift and change. Your work is beautiful.

Jim (visit their site)

Wonderful, but sad, poem you write here, Perry. Lasting comfort just doesn't come easily.
Sorry I'm so late in getting back here, my week was very busy and hectic.

gabrielle (visit their site)

to be lost to sorrow... few are willing to trust so completely. Beautiful words