If I have choices
I won’t like to sit here counting the petals
If I have choices
I would rather run away from your life
But I know you are always in my mind
No matter how far I go
No matter how many choices I have
One Single Impression: choices
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14 Responses to "One Single Impression: choices"
A sense of sad defeat in this poem! And yet there is a touch of beautiful yearning!
And this too shall pass. Believe me..
ode to shoes
a sad rendering.. still, u express a true emotion.. yearning is there for sure..!
My OSI
Sad. Time is the cure.
Well written.
I agree with harshadji and gautami.. will pass with time.. nothing stays..every moment we are creating memories...
Love the 'counting the petals' line.
How very wonderful, how very wonderful.
Please have you all a good start into the new week.
daily athens
the mind can be like that~
"But I know you are always in my mind
No matter how far I go"
You read my mind about something- I can totally relate! Nicely done~
Very intriguing piece!
Counting the petals like: "he loves me, he loves me not, he loves me, he loves me not" and so on and on...:)
But it is love that made you count petals, right?
I so love this piece of yours dear! :)
this is just wonderful!
http://mypoeticpath.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/the-spirit-of-etsy/
So very good but a little scary as well. Your poet's choice is made before even giving thought isn't it? Almost like not having choices. :)
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So full of emotions- Loved your words here-
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