One Single Impression: choices

If I have choices
I won’t like to sit here counting the petals
If I have choices
I would rather run away from your life
But I know you are always in my mind
No matter how far I go
No matter how many choices I have

14 Responses to "One Single Impression: choices"

Greyscale Territory (visit their site)

A sense of sad defeat in this poem! And yet there is a touch of beautiful yearning!

gautami tripathy (visit their site)

And this too shall pass. Believe me..

ode to shoes

Leo (visit their site)

a sad rendering.. still, u express a true emotion.. yearning is there for sure..!

Harshad mehta (visit their site)

Sad. Time is the cure.

Well written.

Ramesh Sood (visit their site)

I agree with harshadji and gautami.. will pass with time.. nothing stays..every moment we are creating memories...

twitches (visit their site)

Love the 'counting the petals' line.

Anonymous (visit their site)

How very wonderful, how very wonderful.

Please have you all a good start into the new week.

daily athens

Tammie Lee (visit their site)

the mind can be like that~

Patti (visit their site)

"But I know you are always in my mind
No matter how far I go"
You read my mind about something- I can totally relate! Nicely done~

Tumblewords: (visit their site)

Very intriguing piece!

Amity (visit their site)

Counting the petals like: "he loves me, he loves me not, he loves me, he loves me not" and so on and on...:)

But it is love that made you count petals, right?

I so love this piece of yours dear! :)

Geraldine (visit their site)

this is just wonderful!

Jim (visit their site)

So very good but a little scary as well. Your poet's choice is made before even giving thought isn't it? Almost like not having choices. :)

Anonymous (visit their site)

So full of emotions- Loved your words here-

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